Edit?

Wow!  It's been over a month since anything was posted on here!  And here's a clue why.  I had to read a 400 page book called "Guns, Germs, and Steel" and then write an essay about it.  Brutal.  I think when I'm "working" on an essay, I waste more time than I'm actually productive for.  But it's finally done!!!

Now would anyone like to edit it for me pretty please??  I usually ask my mom to edit for me, but she's unfortunately in Florida at the moment and won't get back until after it's due.  It's 1327 words or almost three pages 1.5 spaced.  I just need someone (or someones) to read it for flow and see if it all makes sense.  You don't have to have read the book to understand the essay.

It's due on Monday so if you have time to read it by Friday sometime, I'd really appreciate it!  You can either use track changes in Microsoft Word, or print/scribble all over it/scan it back, or just tell me what you think.

Thanks in advance!!